Did you know ‘kat’ means ‘cat’ in Dutch? It fits perfectly in your poem, a bird flies into the shadows of the (seemingly) dreaming cat. I like this kind of unintended meanings in poetry. I also understand your dusk is another kind of dusk. I am constantly surprised (and grateful) about the many possible associations with the theme.

Friend of life and beauty and foe of spoilers of life and beauty. Golden marriage. Grandfather. Pianist and micro poet. Dutch, European.

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